Love

Location

Follow my steps to a path of no return
Where the sun is bright and the fire always burn
Many will come to feel the light
On their darkest day of the coldest night

Confusion will run in an emotion so deep
Salt and water rushing the river's keep
To crave the not likes and reject the wanted
Hurting for eternity this heart is haunted

Falling in and falling out we grasp hold of happiness
But time again we slip out and loose hold of selflessness
Destroying the closest emotion to God it's hard to try again
But being alone is a burden behold through prayers a search begins

Hope this time the light you feel is the suns almighty power
And when night befalls in still together without the scorching fire
Love is the game the heart is the canvas piece the piece together
When change has come a page the same amounts the greatest weather

Comments

powerful.imani

This poem was so very powerful filled with emotions and grace,very excellent work i enjoyed my read.You are an outstanding poet so continue to write because you are talent with your words. The message you gave about love touch my heart because love can be so hard to find and you express that in your poem .

 Check out my poems when you get a chance and hopefully it inspires you like your poem did for me 

keep up the good work 

Quiknodda17

Thank you i will

Quiknodda17

Thank you I will most definitely read your poems starting tonight.

powerful.imani

Thank you so very much 

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