mistakes

Your vision has become blurred as you’re on your way out ,

It’s hard to deny while you are falling down.

Can you hear my voice is it getting to loud?

I do not want you to make the same mistakes that i had

Cause if you do. You’ll become like me,

A ghoul of the unwanted and unclean.

So use that holy fire that burns inside you

And build your own path because it’s not too late.

You do not have to be damned to the fields of punishment like some monstrosity.

Because you are anything but you’re an angel.

Yes you might have fallen but you are not evil you were just betrayed.

Betrayed by almost everyone.

But revenge is not the answer it might feel good,

But that only last for like five seconds.

Then the good feeling is gone,

And leaves only

regret.

 

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