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Thu, 02/21/2013 - 21:54 -- Mary R.

Location

55350
United States
44° 52' 35.8572" N, 94° 26' 19.644" W

You are more

than tears and dust and roses,

more than ash and blue sky

and old scars.

you are more,

beloved creature,

you are the wind itself,

the sky,

the poetic promise to all that is broken

that healing comes

unstoppable as the tide,

like dawn over the ocean.

But ah, beloved-

you were always more.

Comments

FireAndIce328

I like this a lot. Always reminding the person they have scars but are beloved. Love it. :)

Mary R.

Thank you!(:

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