Motivation in Me

February 2, 2020

Motivation is the dedication that drives me every day

It’s like how the sun don’t let the clouds cover the cheering rays

Play and find the way until goals become the better pay

Trim the chances of giving up and bring the chances that your parents motivate you to bring

Asses the artists which come within me

Who inspires me you may ask? The rose that bloomed me in the midnight sky, my mom

Ellen DeGeneres has the key to my inspiration as well so why don’t we continue in life, enjoy it, reach our goals and go on a shopping spree

Long is the life, let’s live the life, and sing a song to continue the motivation in me.

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Comments (3)

Annette M VelasquezFeb 2, 2020

This is inspirational, energy- filled and full of the positive. Your message is strong and to the point, but the rhythm looses flow somewhat. Try staying with rhyme or free verse, you can blend both, but don't switch abruptly. Also, keep the lines and line breaks mostly uniform. I don't mean to sound overly critical... your writing is powerful -these are just little things to enhance it. I've been writing and publishing nearly 35 years! Keep writing and read tons!

cjay slimFeb 2, 2020

great piece

frodriguezFeb 2, 2020

Motivation is important for me which is why I chose to write this poem for the scholarship entry because it says who and how I'm inspired in an everyday basis.