the naked eye .
judgements. judgements are deadly and dangerous.
they cause tears to appear from a lake of loneliness.
the lake eventually becomes an ocean and leads to depression.
depression causes emotions to shatter as if they were a part of a broken mirror.
fear. fear is often unwanted and embedded with obstacles.
it causes thoughts to become trapped like a caged bird.
neglect. neglect is talent chained to a hollow dungeon of sorrow.
hate causes minds to become lost, like a map without directions.
j u d g e m e n t s
creating a foggy vision, leading to chances being unused
a blurry vision is leading you down the wrong path
you are blind.
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