Our sweet victory

 

stars on a ripped flag. 
Gleaming colors that show after that fateful day. 
Gratitude of the soldiers lives in every way. 
Tears shed for the now deceased. 
Leaving along a decrepit feeling.
But, somewhere in their hearts now bleeding,
A new spark was receding. 
The hope for the new. 
A now solemnly sworn promise.
That with that torn flag,
A battle was won.
And the lives that were taken were taken for a reason. 
To stand before America. 
Yes, America. 
And say , hey we did it!
We are free and everything is exactly the way it should be. 
So, remember the flag in it's honor.
Say the pledge with a hearty voice. 
Let no tear be shed. 
For the deceased live on in the heart of Americans every day. 
In every way. 
God bless the USA!!!
This poem is about: 
My country

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