Pain, Secrets, and Carteography

Open sore bleeding ink,
black as night and smooth as skin,
fall upon my open page,
sing the laments I hide within.

Fluttering paper, blurried lead,
help my soul to understand.
My pain traces lines to slowly map
a new blank, mysterious land.

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