Ping

Location

Ping ping the notification of a like

The sound of satisfaction

The sound I strive for 

 

Recognition of my hard work

Picking filters, using quotes, hashtagging

Making sure the world knows I'm here

 

I'm the generation of instant gratification

Did something important? Post it

Went somewhere fun? Post it

 

My business is never my own

Day in and day out I spend thinking about the ping ping

I smile, snap, delete, repeat

 

Hungry for likes, no longer the sweet blonde

But a technology zombie

Living my life forever thinking about the ping ping

 

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Comments

tori.chanchan

Hiya! 

I love writing, but poems are not my strong point. I was just hoping you could give me some suggestions on changes you would like to see in this poem. 

Thnak you, 

Tori Chandler

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