Is this right

I can see the galaxy when I look into his eyes

I just keep hoping these feelings don't die

The way he smiles, oh lord have mercy on my soul

For I think my lifes done taking a toil

A single hug takes all the pain away

A call a text and life seems so much less gray

The long talks on the phone, makes me feel less alone

Oh no greater place to be led astray

Never been to this place without it turning gray

Hoping its not a dream

Hoping in the end I don't need to scream

waking up in his arms, being pulled into his chest

Loving me at my worse, knowing he deserves me at my best

Oh how I wonder if this is right

..or if this is just another dream that I wake up and fight

This poem is about: 
Me

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