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Ruined Shrines


Leaves are falling from my heart. What used to blossom in the light is now burning in your absence- a fire taming the flames of its own fright. How can I write for a world that chopped my heart apart, dancing in the heat of my flames after igniting the spark? Still I write in the flares rising high, Still I write until the embers die, Still I write before my heart rests in ash, hoping my words will find your match. Let them bring you back to the place where sits my ash, and a seed hiding in the mess, waiting just to catch your sight before burrowing in the soil, away from the world and its burning shrines. Absorbing your golden light, drinking the rains in your eyes; which, through the years to demise still pierce my skies. Hoping the feed of our memories will help me grow, before the wind sways your black hair and your tear-shaken brow. Wishing to see you before my crow takes flight- which once was a sparrow.
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal loss and longing grounded in specific relationship, with minimal philosophical abstraction.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple interconnected ideas per 10 lines: heartbreak, writing as survival, memory, transformation, hope.

DarkSentimentBright

Predominantly melancholic and sorrowful with faint hope, dominated by pain and absence.

StillEnergyExplosive

Dynamic imagery of burning, flames, fire; intensifying repetition of 'Still I write' creates momentum.

MicroLengthEpic

23 lines falls in 16-30 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Dense metaphor (heart as burning landscape), personification, extended nature imagery, lyrical ornamentation throughout.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; direct emotional address without dramatic distance or narrative structure.

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Comments (3)

Rajdeep_Mellowy
It's an award to have anyone understand our words. Thankyou. Wish you luck my friend and all the other poets in this world.
Bubble Bee
It's always so hard to let others see the scars that your past left behind. Putting the pain into words is probably the only cure our souls could wish for.
Rajdeep_Mellowy
To all the poets who once loved and live now to write of the bitter sweet ache of pain. All of those who knows more pain better then all the things they ever gained

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