Snapshots

Tue, 10/29/2019 - 04:09 -- CH

turn out blurry sometimes.

 

Shaken and hurried attempts at holding on

to the golden hour

and the silver lining

 

But the bronze beats keep on

ticking ceaselessly into oblivion,

and the immemorial time

yet we try to remember,

or to recall,

forever

Comments

TamingOfSeaWolves

love the opening line, snapshots turn out blurry sometimes? sets the mood for the whole poem

CH

I'm glad it did what I hoped it would do!

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