Split Down the Middle

As a kid I thought I could never give up,

I would work out every problem to make the world better,

Being exhausted every day till I gave my all,

Solving all of the problems,

Feeling grown up forever.

 

Years’d go by and I’d tackle them all

From drama to kickball I always stood tall.

I felt so invincible I would have never knew

That it’d all crash down into a pile of stew.

 

That day I remember like the back of my hand

I was torn between two sides

My best friend, and his girl.

It was late march last year and I remember it like yesterday

When they both came to be with anger in their eyes

I tried to convince them to go back, listen and change

but with no luck, effort or care they made a tragic demise

Out of the love that held them together, that drove them apart

And now I have realized, not all problems are my fault.

 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

csmourich

I wrote this poem in expression of how I have come in an emotional maturity from the do it all people pleaser, to a reasonable guy that minds his buisness and focuses on his issues. The people mentioned in this poem are fine and I am fine too but this was a real emotional impact and I deeply remember seeing both of them on the same day visibly upset with the others. The rhyme scheme reflects this maturity as it progresses with the story becoming more complex as time went on. 

csmourich

I wrote this poem in expression of how I have come in an emotional maturity from the do it all people pleaser, to a reasonable guy that minds his buisness and focuses on his issues. The people mentioned in this poem are fine and I am fine too but this was a real emotional impact and I deeply remember seeing both of them on the same day visibly upset with the others. The rhyme scheme reflects this maturity as it progresses with the story becoming more complex as time went on.

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