Syntax vs Love
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syntax is:
a harmonious arrangement
lost when it is writer, the by
it harsh is noises. just like sounds
love is:
a harmonious arrangement
Unlike grammar, it can not be "corrected".
and although it can be hard to read
the rules apply same not do,
love is:
an orchestra of souls and hearts
that play in unique tunes
on frequencies that pens nor words nor ears
that even philharmonic pros
could ever hope to hear (alone)
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fluteloops
I absolutely love the concept of this poem, comparing two often analyzed ideas that are rarely considered in the same space. However, I am a bit confused on some of the wording, specifically "lost when it is writer, the by / it harsh is noises" and "the rules apply the same not do." I'm guessing these are typos of some sort? If I'm wrong, please correct me. Otherwise, this is a great piece, especially the last stanza.