Thermostat

Tue, 03/21/2023 - 13:29 -- hunterI

  

I didnt say forever on the first day

but i fell for you and into that embrace

like damn there goes the thermostat

 

if i didnt make a move I'd be bruised, bashed

I fell on the curb for you like boom splat

all of my friends are like whos that

for real who is that

I am so glad that i told you that i felt this way 

i was hoping that i would meet someone like you one day

i was shocked that you didnt say goodbye,

cause i thought before i did it a thousand times

i was hoping that it would happen any day now, look

 

yep we definitly have all of the love and the magic

yeah now we all so attached and

you light me on fire, as well as all of the passion

yeah it really is all that i hoped and imagined

 

im cool with all that and

my heart no longer feels like its being cut with a knife

since you walked into my life

but i realize that didnt need to know better cause I

 

I didnt say forever on the first day

but i fell for you and right into that embrace

like damn there goes the thermostat

 

right out of the blue like boom crash

but now your're more than i ever thought i could have

and still all of my friends are like whos that 

no seriously who is that

 

boom thought i hit the ground but i bounced right back

i was seriously hoping that i wouldnt go down like that

and we aint even lacking in trust

and thankfully its not even something that we have to discuss

 

but i had the chance and i pursued it

man im so glad i never blew it

yeah i dont really know how you do it

like dang this is so legit

finally something i can commit 

 

yeah you can email me whenever

now later it doesnt matter

in the middle of the night or at the break of dawn 

go ahead i'll probably still be writing songs cause I

 

I didnt say forever on the first day

but i fell for you and right into that embrace

like damn there goes the thermostat

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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hunterI

Best song I have written so far. This is based off the song SPLAT by Connar Price 

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