Thoughts in the sky

Duh duh duhduh
The bass rattles my car
Time seems irrelevant as I glance at the north star
Each second feels like an eternity
Yet it feels like not even a moment has fleeted
The cool wind brushes my skin but I stay seated
Thoughts blooming with in my mind
Thoughts of family and friends
Thoughts of the those who met untimely ends
Moments in time dance across the night sky
Left in a state that seems to transcend time
My dreams projected in the sky, silent like a mime
My future, my past, both taking turns delivering blows
One reminding me of what I've lost
The other, things that can't be achieved without a cost
In this moment do I accept the truths of my mind
Or do I dive head first in to the future and take what I find?

This poem is about: 
Me

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