Truly Alive

Thu, 05/15/2014 - 21:23 -- Zaproma

The kiss unpromised; not by your will

or your desire

or your loyalty to love me

but by time, space and the  events which separate our mortal selves

longs deep

within all of my cells.

I want to see you again, feel you again; 

for the sanity of myself and yourself 

we must reunite.

So that all elements

harmonious 

may seem so just once more before we depart,

before we lose all sense of identiy 

in relation to this incredulous thrid univers we share

(the uiverse of love).

The final universe which connects us two to each other must survive

in order for my will to survive.

I love you and you love I.

This must always be 

or...I...will...never...be

 

truly alive

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