Unknown Place

                      Deep, deep into my soul you'll find another me,

      my thoughts are flying around, inside a cage, surrounded by pain.

         You'll discover the prisoner within the walls of my own body...

                         voices telling me I'm a nobody, as i scream,

                                my lungs expand asking for air yet

                                                 i let no air in.

                 Steaming drops of tears slide gently down my face

        as I ask myself, who i am.The skin on my own body seems not to fit,

              peeling it off as i try to find my way in. The agony is killing me, 

                      but i realize I'm not far away, from finding myself 

                                  in a crowd of strangers in my head.

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