The Way Life Should Be

The whispers in the wind

The sinners full of sin

the day breaks in the evening 

and the words with meanings

 

There are things that we hate

Even when it is too late

but we don't realize 

there are tears fogging our eyes

 

Through the haze we see

The things we don't want to be

but where there is good, is bad

and where there is happy, is sad

 

When I cry and there is no one

I tell myself that is it, I am done

to give up is to lose

but then I cruise

 

Cruising on the ocean 

Make a motion

Because this is the way life should be

exactly how you see

 

Victoria

Signing Off

 

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