why

can you tell me why youre so in love

with just the feeling like slow agave.

heavy hands riding down my waves.

when youre alone who do you crave?

Im around hot crowds but its draining.

one time I walked with you it was raining.

my hands numb just like your head.

guess you could not feel my anxious edge. 

falling in to me without knowing.

your sea of feelings over flowing.

 

can you tell me why youre so in love.

with a pretty paki dove.

her looks her life so high defined.

yet you have never met her mind.

before you reach for her figure

takes notes on her Avril vigior.

dim the lights and look closer.

bud do you really know her?

 

dont know why Im still involved.

because my feelings have dissolved.

the constant cold I face-- your presence fills the space.

a lack of people to trust

dont know if this is just lust.

you tell me everything youre missing too

"mama's boy" cause your dad left at two.

why do you paint a picture which you are not

you just want a body to show off

dont forget

     when i said

            im soft. 

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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