Young Love

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This feeling I have is strong

It keeps me going all night long

Even when the night is cold and dark

I feel the need to walk apart

Or better yet any place where you and I can meet

For together we will keep eachother company

No need for sleep

Here we will discover

Here we will discover

What I am feeling so strongly

How I hope you feel fondly

Because what you mean to me is more than conversation

Or even the story, the whole constellation

I need you to hear me for me

And forget about our past to see

Here we will discover

Here we will discover

What truly possesses me to scream and shout

That here and now with no doubt I will tell you, tell you everything

From what I think, to my constant day dreaming

But sadly instead I hold in my feeling of strength

And my constant self hate

To what I hope you will discover

What I hope you will discover 

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