Cold to the Bone

Thu, 10/23/2014 - 01:46 -- ztuoni

This song is pouring out of my eyes

into the crumpled paper

in clear fluorescent ink

like waves crashing on the shore

 

Your smile reminds me of the way

night changes to day

under our stars

like a comet breaking through thin air

with a crunch

just like that my heart snaps in two



You broke my heart

like thunder breaks through clouds

with shards of ice

ice-cold chilling me to the bone

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