Help Her

In the dark corner she hides,

waiting for your love to reside. 

Laying beside all of her hopes and dreams. 

Shattered is her love,

confusion takes it's place. 

 

There you stand  a clenched fist in your hand. 

No sympathy do you have ,

Youre the cause of her tears. 

Please save your anger to give her a few more years. 

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This poem is about: 
Our world

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

words are a weapon when one knows how to use it

you paint a graphic picture about abuse

well said

come join my group mvp-most valuable poets

SamanthaZombro

Thank you so much it would be my pleasure 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you for joining my group samantha

i email all my poets to write about inspiration (whatever that means to you)

this is about building life giving relationships with people

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please add your poem to my group mvp-most valuable poets

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