My Dear Comrade

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When I was in hard

You made me in comfort

 

When I thought myself low

You taught me to glow

 

When I got tears in my eyes

You compelled me towards smiles

 

When I was sighing like a furnace

You made me spreading my fragrance

 

When I was feeling myself disable to do anything

You made myself able to do everything

 

When I was tired of the world

You made my tiredness to be hurled

 

When I saw in the eyes of thine

You made my eyes shine

 

When I stared in your eyes and read

They declared that you are my dear comrade

 

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