Someone New

Location

Looking at the walls,

Never knowing what's on the other side.

Looking at fake smiles,

Never knowing what they hide.

 

Please try to collaborate

Break down my walls

See that my emotions, I fabricate.

 

Broken, shattered, undone

I know that it can be you

Pick up my peices,

Make me something new.

Comments

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